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Asphalt on bare feet and night air on bare skin,
we are silent and his car is in neutral and we
are slowly and quietly entering the old world.
I am too young to be drinking, to be smoking,
to be driving, but the steering wheel is cool
beneath my fingers and she trusts me, she
loves me. "Don't crash my car," he says and
laughs. We are all cross-eyed and giddy, filled
with vodka and cigarette smoke and this is a
bad idea, but I don't say so. Lately, bad ideas
are all that can keep us from rotting inside.
The tires fall away and we are flying, I swear,
we are sailing as the night swirls by
in shades of indigo and green.
He is eighteen and my new best friend, buying
us cigarettes and lending us cars. She and I,
we just want to feel alive, and killing ourselves
seems to be the best way to do it. He's telling
me some story that I'll never remember, and
she's quietly smoking through a window in the
back, and we are soaring back through the rift
in the universe to a silent house. We are at peace
here, we are at rest.
The grass is still damp, and the house is still dark,
and the car is still heavy as we roll it back to its
spot on the lawn. It's four in the morning but the
fire's burning gold and we're too young to sleep.
His eyes are on the flames, and hers are on the
stars, and suddenly, I love her more than I ever had.
She watches stars shoot and planets collide and
I watch her, the darkness inking her hair as her
fingertips burn. "We'll remember this," she says
as we fall asleep together, the sun rising in the
distance. With smoke clinging to our clothes, and
the taste of stars on our tongues, I know in years
I will learn to regret this, but tonight
we're on top of the world, we are truly alive.
we are silent and his car is in neutral and we
are slowly and quietly entering the old world.
I am too young to be drinking, to be smoking,
to be driving, but the steering wheel is cool
beneath my fingers and she trusts me, she
loves me. "Don't crash my car," he says and
laughs. We are all cross-eyed and giddy, filled
with vodka and cigarette smoke and this is a
bad idea, but I don't say so. Lately, bad ideas
are all that can keep us from rotting inside.
The tires fall away and we are flying, I swear,
we are sailing as the night swirls by
in shades of indigo and green.
He is eighteen and my new best friend, buying
us cigarettes and lending us cars. She and I,
we just want to feel alive, and killing ourselves
seems to be the best way to do it. He's telling
me some story that I'll never remember, and
she's quietly smoking through a window in the
back, and we are soaring back through the rift
in the universe to a silent house. We are at peace
here, we are at rest.
The grass is still damp, and the house is still dark,
and the car is still heavy as we roll it back to its
spot on the lawn. It's four in the morning but the
fire's burning gold and we're too young to sleep.
His eyes are on the flames, and hers are on the
stars, and suddenly, I love her more than I ever had.
She watches stars shoot and planets collide and
I watch her, the darkness inking her hair as her
fingertips burn. "We'll remember this," she says
as we fall asleep together, the sun rising in the
distance. With smoke clinging to our clothes, and
the taste of stars on our tongues, I know in years
I will learn to regret this, but tonight
we're on top of the world, we are truly alive.
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i call this a heptahedron.
i'm nothing but a washed up cliché
with pages of poetry locked behind my eyes
and forced under my damaged fingernails.
skin is my canvas, an empty slate,
and i'm painting stars in colors that do not have
names; colors that only exist in my mind.
every day is a wait for 11:11 and the opportunity
to discuss my darkest secrets with four-leaved clovers
and moving lights in the night sky.
i'm dancing on the tips of my toes
to avoid stepping on cracks in the pavement
and killing a family of ants.
i spend afternoons making up religions
and teaching them to my stuffed animals
just so i can f
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to an ocean-eyed boy:
im writing poetry in crooked black lines down your throat and along your neck because maybe they will lead you back to me.
i'm looking through attics and dark broken alleyways for something to believe in, but all im coming up with is dust and empty pockets of gasp-for-breath moments when im alone and the silence is crushing down on me. i cant find it, cant find the faith youve slung so easily around your neck next to your collection of paper thoughts and that piece of my heart.
(but i could never find you, either, so maybe
its just me.)
yesterday i went to the beach when it was raining. around
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after you died
i.
they asked me if there was something
of yours that I wanted to keep
I wanted
to keep your eyelashes, your breath,
your blood
I said this, and they looked
sad, said they meant did I want your
clothes and possessions, your things
I didn't know what I wanted
cradling my head with my arms and
quietly saying no over and over
my mouth
dry with the taste of morning sickness
and old seawater
a month later, I wanted all your clothes
I was scrub-faced and tired
the yellow
of the walls hurt my eyes, buried in wet
towels, sleeping naked on the floor every
night
ii.
I fucked somebody else
after the funeral
"somebody else" sound
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This is my subconscious telling me not to drink so much.
Also, I've found that illegally driving cars in the middle of the night isn't nearly as fun now that I have my license. :/
SAY NOTHING ABOUT MY LINEBREAKS. I like them where they are.
What do you think about the imagery?
Does it flow like a story or is it too choppy?
Also, I've found that illegally driving cars in the middle of the night isn't nearly as fun now that I have my license. :/
SAY NOTHING ABOUT MY LINEBREAKS. I like them where they are.
What do you think about the imagery?
Does it flow like a story or is it too choppy?
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"We are all cross-eyed and giddy, filled
with vodka and cigarette smoke and this is a
bad idea, but I don't say so. Lately, bad ideas
are all that can keep us from rotting inside. " I love this.
with vodka and cigarette smoke and this is a
bad idea, but I don't say so. Lately, bad ideas
are all that can keep us from rotting inside. " I love this.